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The Zinc’s

Written by: Ava. N
Characters by: Ava. N


One of the saddest days of Zinc’s was in 2000 on Friday, Jan 1. It was a new year’s day, everybody was having fun, running around playing, and singing. The Zinc always invited people they came into their village. The people of Zink were the nicest and smartest of the village. They didn't even know what was going to happen next when they invited Zandar. Zandar the ruler of kings. He wore a black robe, and went straight to the church on Friday, Jan 1. I was there. I knew what he looked liked and I didnt like him at first.

Napkin followed to the church, trying to stay behind him but not too close but not too far. He took off his robe, then some weird muscler cats came out of nowhere.

“Man those are some big cat’s, I wonder if they're just here to worship their gods or something.” Napkin whispered.

“Is the ship here yet?” Zandar Whispered.

“Yes my king.” The minion bowed his head in respeak.

A starved cat wobbled up the stars with swollen pink eyes.

“My king may you spray us some food.” The starving swollen cat whimpered.

“My people are bringing some food right now and it's filled with crates of bread and fish. Tell all your friends to come over and get some bread and fish. The more friends you bring the more bread and fish you get.” Znadar said in a happy tone.

“Yes my lord! I shall hurry off and get all my family and frineds.” The starving cat, not looking starving anymore, ran off behind an open alley.

“I can see the crates from here, you may go get more cat’s.” Zandar hesitated. “For our feast.”

A few minutes later, a large number of boxes, and crates were everywhere around the church. I never smelled like fish or bread anywhere, it was mostly smelled like powder. Napkin snuck behind the church getting to one of the boxes. The smells stinged his nose, making him almost sneeze. He tried all his strength to open one of the boxes.

“AHH!” Napkin screamed.

Answer:

Yes! Good start... I would suggest adding some stronger vocabulary to parts so the reader can enjoy the story more as it continues.

Explanation:

Instead of using “saddest“, use “desolate”, etc. I hope this helped! Keep writing, love it so far!

Fantasy of Lights is a business that makes and sells Christmas lights. Fantasy of Lights makes over 6,000,000 twinkle lights each year. Fantasy of Lights sells their Christmas lights for a price set by the demand of the consumer. What economic system is this?

Read this excerpt from "Wiley, His Mama, and the Hairy Man” in The People Could Fly

He hollered, "There's nothin here but a sucklin pig!"

This excerpt is from which part of the story?

the exposition
the rising action
the climax
the resolution

1) What are the two main types of democracies?
A) Dictatorship and Direct
B) Monarchy and Representative
C) Republican and Democrat
D) Direct and Representative

2) Which of the following best describes a democracy?
A) A government run by a small group of people.
B) A government run by the people.
C) A government run by a single person.
D) A government run by powerful corporations.

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Explain why we have laws, who is protected by laws, and who is bound by laws.

One way for Oglethorpe to solve the problems of poverty and debt was to create a colony for the purpose of O commerce. O charity. O equality. O fundraising.​

Aaron keeps texting throughout his study session. Why should he minimize such distractions?

to recognize his priorities
to avoid breaks
to maintain his to-do list
to stay focused

Between 1820 and 1850, some Americans discriminated against German immigrants because they.....

A were Protestant.
B did not speak English.
C were hired as skilled workers.
D wanted to become farmers.

How did the Administration of Justice Act change local government?

A It limited who could be tried in Massachusetts judicial courts.
B It stated that British officials must run all meetings.
C It made gatherings, such as town meetings, illegal.
D It established the First Continental Congress.

How does a mixed economy determine who to produce goods and services for?
A. the customer that will buy it
B. the government controls distribution
C. the customer that will buy it, but the government will make rules about worker safety

Compare this map to the maps in the Background Essay and Document A. Why do you think the government decided to move people out of the northern province of Tigray?

Answer fast please!
Jackson supported states’ rights over the preservation of the Union during the Nullification

True

False

Based on the reading, make a prediction: Where did power come from in ancient Egypt? giving brain liest for whoever answers ITS ONLY ONE WRD U NEED TO ANSWER

Which of these resources will most likely be depleted first?
A Wind
B Solar energy
C Fossil fuels
D Water

The United States consumed about 19 million barrels of petroleum per day in 2000. This rate continues to increase. It is important to develop alternative sources of energy because petroleum —
F will eventually use up all the oxygen needed for human survival
G is being spilled into the ocean faster than it is being used
H fails to store solar energy and contains limited chemical energy
J is a limited source of energy that is almost impossible to renew

Which best describes a tornado?


a hurricane-like storm that rarely occurs in Georgia.
a tropical storm that forms over the ocean and moves to land.
a column of air stretching from a thunderstorm to the ground.
a windy cold front that follows thunderstorms and hail.​

What did the Greeks believe about people?

They could use their minds to choose good governments.

They lacked the potential to rule themselves.

They were better off relying on a strong leader.

They asked too many questions that they were unable to answer.

Which economic system is based on customs and social roles?
A. Traditional
B. Market
C. Command

Can a person under the influence of a love charm or potion be married in California? why or Why not?

How can ecotourism prevent people from leaving their homes in the Caribbean?
Write your response in 2 to 3 complete sentences.

Independence Movements in Africa

Between 1957 and 1993 nearly 50 African states achieved independence from colonial rule. The first sparks of resistance to foreign control took shape much earlier, though, in some cases hundreds of years earlier. Independence movements developed throughout Africa in the mid-1900s. Although they followed different paths, they shared a common beginning: resistance to domination by foreign powers. Unfortunately, once in control, many of these independence movements imposed their own form of domination. As a result, modern Africa continues to wrestle with many of the same political problems that motivated the independence movements of the past.
Describe the common trigger for the indepedence movements in Africa.

The Yazoo Land Act of 1795 sold much of modem Mississippi and Alabama to four land development companies for $500,000. The Act was passed by the General Assembly and signed by the
governor of Georgia
Which additional factor associated with the Yazoo Land Act MOST contributed to public opposition to the deal?
A
Many in the state believed that $500,000 was far less than the land was worth
B
Many in the state supported prominent Georgia senator, James Jackson, who was opposed to the act and wanted it nullified
С
Many in the state had discovered that land companies had bribed some members of the Georgia General Assembly to pass the act.
D
Many in the state felt that the land lottery system was a much fairer and more equitable method to distribute land to the residents of Georgia,

Suppose a country wants to protect workers and industries in their own nation from foreign competition. Which of the following would BEST meet their goal?
A. impose a tariff
B. impose an embargo
C. lower their GDP

The following question references the novel The Red Badge of Courage by Stephen Crane.

Which is not a theme that is present in The Red Badge of Courage?
a.
Courage is fighting when afraid rather than fleeing.
c.
Being a man means accepting one's mistakes and living with confident strength.
b.
War is not a fair way to test a man's courage.
d.
Maturity is often attained after being tested and humbled by a challenge.

Which principle best applies to this example?

One of the island governments allowed the citizens to vote on issues while another government had a single leader who made all the decisions alone.

A - Principle 1: People organize for stability and safety
B - Principle 2: Governments use power to get things done
C – Principle 3: Governments use power differently

What was the earliest challenge that Pánfilo de Narváez and his crew faced on their journey?
a.
There were no challenges on the journey.
b.
They were attacked by Native Americans.
c.
They lost there supply ships.
d.
A storm capsized their barges.


Please select the best answer from the choices provided

A
B
C
D

Last summer, Marco and his family vacationed in Georgia. They visited Atlanta for a few days and attended a professional soccer game while there. They also went hiking through the wilderness and camped near Brasstown Bald, the highest peak in Georgia. Before heading home, Marco and his family decided to spend a few days relaxing on Georgia's white sand beaches. 4. Which statement about Marco and his family's vacation is correct? A They began their visit to Georgia in the Piedmont region, before traveling to the Blue Ridge region, and finally to the Coastal Plain region. OB. They began their visit to Georgia in the Blue Ridge region, before traveling to the Appalachian Plateau region, and finally to the Piedmont region C. They began their visit to Georgia in the Coastal Plain region, before traveling to the Appalachian Plateau region, and finally to the Blue Ridge region. OD. They began their visit to Georgia in the Valley and Ridge region, before traveling to the Appalachian Summa at.​

Which of the following depicts an analogy that might be shown in a political cartoon?
A.
Uncle Sam representing the United States
B.
politician drawn with overly large glasses and big ears
C.
school with poor discipline shown as Disneyland
D.
an oil spill covers an entire ocean

Christina has swim practice before school most days. After school and before dinner, she likes to relax, see friends, or watch television. She has only a small window of time to study after dinner because she goes to bed early to get up for practice. As a result, Christina has not been finishing her work on time and has struggled to study for some classes.

When is the best time of day for Christina to study?

in the morning, instead of going to swim practice
in the late afternoon, instead of relaxing
in the early evening, during dinner
in the late evening, before bed

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